By Andrew Tompkins Andrew is a scientist,
author, and graphic design consultant who lives with this wife and
daughter on the outskirts of Melbourne, Australia.
Information about his other publications, his bio, and
how to contact him can be found on his website:
www.andrewtompkins.com |
Dennis Grubb didn't
see her as he entered the store. He walked straight past, wiping
aside strands of rain-wet hair which stuck to his forehead. The shop
keeper, an older man with a grim demeanor, eyed Dennis suspiciously - as
he did with all his customers - watching to make sure he didn't pocket
something as he moved between the shelves.
She watched him as well, her gaze fixed, eyes
unblinking, as Dennis moved through aisles of bric-a-brac and second-hand
books - along with anything else the shop keeper could pick up for next to
nothing at a yard sale - right alongside everything you'd normally expect
from a general store.
Dennis didn't feel her gaze, but he was aware of
the shop keeper's. He knew he was under suspicion, and it made his
skin crawl. Dennis felt guilty despite himself; always did, in this
store and every other shop he entered. He couldn't help it. He
tried hard to act like he wasn't a shop lifter, to give the impression of
indifference, as if there was no way in the world he would even think
about stealing something. But he just knew that the harder he tried
to act normal, the more suspicious he seemed to the guy behind the
counter. He could go crazy if he let it get to him but somehow he
summoned enough courage to suppress the fears building up within him and
go on. He busied himself searching for the cough syrup.
Now, he thought, it couldn't be just any cough
syrup. It had to be a non-drowsy sort. You don't want to
fall asleep now do you? he could hear her shriek. It had to be
the least expensive non-drowsy sort. Don't waste money on high
faluting brand names because that's all you're paying for you know - the
name. But it couldn't be any of that ‘no name' rubbish.
You never know what you'll end up with do you? Well? And
it wouldn't do at all to buy a small bottle when a larger bottle would of
course be more economical. It's cheaper in the long run, stupid.
Don't you have a brain?
He picked up what seemed like the most
appropriate bottle. He read the fine print to make sure it wasn't
going to send him off. He checked its price and volume against the
other bottles nearby and, after about half a minute, decided with relief
that this bottle was by far the best selection.
He wandered over to the cluttered counter, taking
no notice of the advertised specials on potato chips and dips, or the
second-hand penny dreadfuls lined up on the left at a buck each. He
scanned the label one last time before handing the bottle to the shop
keeper. He was pretty sure it was okay.
"Anything else?" the shop keeper inquired, not
looking at him any more. Behind him, against the wall, a large,
ominous - and always familiar - clock ticked loudly.
"No, that's all," Dennis replied.
"Do you want a bag?" Tick, tick...
"No."
He began searching for the correct change.
He had to select the notes and coins of the lowest denominations so that
it left him with the fewest notes and coins possible at the end of the
purchase. Somehow, she could remember every single note or coin in
his possession at any time and, when she got her hands on the receipt for
the cough medicine, she would undoubtedly want to inspect the money he had
left.
"That'll be four dollars eighty."
He'd already prepared the exact change and he
handed it to the shop keeper.
"Do you want a receipt?" the shop keeper asked
him.
"Yes," he responded a little too quickly, trying
to hide the internal horror at the suggestion that it was possible for him
to leave the shop without one.
Before the shop keeper had a chance to get the
receipt, the clock made a loud and vaguely familiar noise, and the shop
keeper absently gave it a whack. The clock began chiming like it was
supposed to do, which inexplicably gave Dennis the chills.
The shop keeper handed Dennis his receipt.
Dennis placed it carefully in his cracked brown leather wallet, and tucked
the bottle into the right hand pocket of his overcoat, then turned towards
the door.
It was then that he saw her for the first time.
Dennis stared at her for what seemed the longest
time, and all the while she stared back at him. They were both
transfixed, locked in an eternal embrace of sorts as they gazed into each
other's eyes, and all he could think was that she was the most beautiful
woman he had ever seen. Her hair was like a flowing river of auburn,
her eyes like deep and knowing forest pools. The complexion of her
skin was pale and without flaw, and yet her face exuded so much character;
as if she knew all there was to know about every single thing. As if
she knew exactly who he was inside. As if she knew who he was.
He tried to find the words to say, to break this moment so they could move
onto the next. But whilst his mind fumbled desperately for the right
words, the shop keeper knew exactly what to say.
"You can have it for ten bucks."
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He clutched the top
of the plastic bag firmly to protect the painting from the sheets of rain
cutting against his hands and face as he hurried along Blackburn Road.
He turned left into Cypress Avenue and made his
way towards the house. He coughed in fits as he forced his way
through the rain. The huge trees which ran along each side of the
street shook violently in the wind, moving in unison with each gust, a
giant and menacing arboreal ballet. A branch flicked out suddenly as
Dennis passed, catching his sleeve. He yanked it free and sent the
bottle of cough medicine flying out of his pocket. He watched with
horror as it headed for the ground. It just missed the concrete,
landing on the grass just at the edge of the nature strip. He
snatched it up, placing it back in his pocket, not wanting to consider how
he could ever have explained it to her if it had smashed.
The house was a typical three bedroom red brick
single story; the same as every other house in the suburban street, more
or less. He knew she might be watching from the window but had
decided to risk her seeing the bag he carried. If she did see him
carrying something, he'd have to tell her he couldn't say what it was
because it was meant to be a surprise for her. Of course, if it came
to that, he'd have to go out again and try to smuggle an actual surprise
into the house, but that was a worry for another day. Right now, the
most important thing was to get the painting home and to hide it where she
wouldn't find it.
At the side of the house was a small wooden door.
A single bolt holding it shut. The brick room within was actually
underneath the main section of the house and was full of old and musty
clothes, a couple of electric heaters that no longer worked, a small color
television which Dennis had carried down there after smoke started pouring
out the back of it one night, and stacks of old magazines and books, some
of them damaged by the dank surroundings. The room doubled as a tool
shed with a modest collection of gardening equipment - rakes, spades, a
wheel barrow, and so on - and, of course, a lawn mower that only worked
sometimes; usually in the winter when the grass didn't really need it.
A padlock secured the bolt on the wooden door but
he had his own key. She also had a copy of the key but he couldn't
remember the last time she'd used it. He rushed in and shut the door
behind him, making sure not to let it bang against the frame in the wind.
There was a wooden latch inside to hold the door shut and he fastened it
quickly, letting go of the door carefully and pausing to make sure that
the wind wasn't going to rattle the door noisily on the latch. The
door held tight.
He looked around the room which had become
progressively more cramped over the years and found a suitable spot to
hide the painting. There was a fairly dry pile of newspapers stacked
on a bench against the far wall. He lifted up some papers in the
center of the pile and slipped the painting still in its bag into the gap.
He carefully arranged the newspapers, pulling them forward so they
completely hid the bag from sight. He looked up suddenly as he heard
her moving around in the living room above him - click clack, click clack.
Until now his heart had been racing and he'd unwittingly held his breath
with apprehension, almost expecting the door of the little room to be
flung open and to see her standing there, fierce anger in her eyes.
But she was still safely upstairs. Beginning to breathe again, he
felt a bit light headed as the blood suddenly rushed to his head.
Taking one last look over his shoulder to make sure everything appeared
normal, he exited the little room and carefully replaced the padlock.
He took a moment to calm himself, to slow his breathing and, in his mind,
he rehearsed what he would say in case she'd seen him coming home with the
bag.
"It was a present for you, Mummy," he said in
response to her question as she shuffled along the hallway towards him.
She had seen him carrying something. He wasn't sure if she'd seen
where he went with it. He'd have to try to move it somewhere safer
later on.
"Dear me, that sounds nice," she said, smiling.
He hated it when she smiled. "But it's not my birthday."
"I know that," he said. "I'll give it to
you when it is your birthday. And I can't tell you what it is so
don't ask."
He rushed past her, placed the bottle of cough
medicine on the kitchen table along with its receipt and headed straight
for his room before she could ask him any questions about how much change
he had left. If she'd known what he'd spent on the painting ...
well, he didn't want to think about it.
He listened to her shuffling around the kitchen.
From the sounds he could imagine her looking at the bottle and, after a
moment, looking at the receipt.
"Was this the best medicine, dear?" she called
out to him.
"Yes, Mummy," he called back.
"Come and have some before your cough gets any
worse. I want to see you drinking this."
"All right. In a minute." He couldn't stand
cough medicine but she insisted he take it. There was really no
point; he had never been any better for it.
He held his breath for a moment and listened.
He listened to her place the bottle back on the table and then - click
clack, click clack - he could hear her move across the kitchen, her
walking frame echoing on the lino - click clack. She began making
herself a pot of tea and he began to breathe again; the painting was safe,
for the moment.
The next day, whilst his mother napped in front
of the television, he considered going down to see her again but decided
he couldn't risk it; not just yet. All night he had been thinking of
those eyes; the deep forest pools which were so entirely perfect.
And as he slept, he dreamed of the woman in the painting, his mind taking
him to strange places with her, to imaginary lands, along flowing streams
in the sunshine, and they held hands and laughed together. Her eyes
sparkled as she laughed and made everything okay.
He allowed a few days to pass before venturing
down to the little room under the house. He'd decided it was
unlikely she'd go down there anyway - she'd have a fair amount of
difficulty negotiating the back steps for one thing - and even if she did,
he didn't think she'd find the painting; the stack of papers was pretty
heavy and he'd hidden the bag well. So, instead of moving the
painting, he'd waited, allowing enough time for her to stop watching every
move he made.
She'd been watching him like a hawk, asking about
where he was going whenever he opened the front or the back door.
This was not unusual; she always watched him. But he knew she was
curious as to the nature of her present. She'd asked him
about it again of course. She wanted to know more. He knew she
would and he'd prepared for it. He'd told her it was for her
birthday. He'd seen it and couldn't walk past it in the shop and she
shouldn't ask him about it any longer or she would spoil the surprise.
And so, after a few days, life was normal again, her scrutiny dissipated,
and he felt he might actually be able to look at the painting again; see
the lines, the colors, those eyes.
He'd been dreaming about the woman in the
painting. That first night, when he lay there looking up into the
blackness, he could see her face. She looked back at him with love.
He had imagined holding her, feeling the warmth of her body against his as
he held her close, resting his chin on the top of her head. He
smiled. But the following night, he found it difficult to remember
exactly what she looked like. The image teased him, floated in and
out of view in his mind's eye, and he decided that the next morning he
just had to see her again. There was nothing else for it.
So, the next morning as he stood in the little
room under the house, he pulled the painting out of its bag and held it up
before him. And there she was again in full color. The
memories came flooding back and he took it all in in an instant; her
smile, her smooth smooth skin, and, of course, her beautiful eyes.
She gazed at him with the love he'd imagined in his dreams. It seems
she had also missed him and was glad to be with him again. As he
stood holding the painting, looking into those eyes, he actually began to
feel sad; sad that he would never know the woman he truly loved.
Because it wasn't appreciation or infatuation or even adoration. No,
he loved her. It was no more complicated than that and the
simplicity of the notion was beginning to bring order to his mind.
Later, he sat on his bed, wondering if there was
any way to smuggle her into the house. He couldn't keep her locked
away down there. And Mother would be suspicious of him going outside
all the time. There had to be some way to get her into his room and
then to conceal her. There just had to be.
The following day, with Mother asleep once more
in front of the television, he stole downstairs, retrieved the painting
from its hidey hole, and brought it to the back door. With one hand
on the door knob and the other holding the plastic bag, he put his head
close to the wooden door, the flaking white paint scratching against his
left ear, and he listened. The television was on, of course.
That was enough to keep the heart racing. But he decided to chance
it; she should still be asleep after all. He opened the door and,
seeing that she wasn't in the hallway, he crossed the kitchen and went
along the short hall to his room, shutting the door behind him.
"Dennis?" she called out almost at once.
"What?" he called back from his bedroom, his
senses alert.
"What are you doing?"
"Nothing," he said. He moved quickly across
his room and slid the painting behind his wardrobe. That was the
best he could do for now. He went out into the living room.
"What were you doing in there?" she asked as he
entered the living room. She tried to get up out of her chair.
She put one hand out to him and planted the other firmly on the rubber
handle of her frame. He helped her up and she stood there staring at
him.
"Nothing, Mummy," he said. "I was just
looking for something. That's all."
She continued to stare at him for a moment before
saying "Put the kettle on." She headed down the hall towards the toilet -
click clack, click clack.
He looked up at the large photo of his mother
which hung on the wall in pride of place above the mantel. It seemed
that he couldn't escape her scrutiny even when she wasn't in the room.
So he went to the kitchen to do as she said.
That night, after he'd tucked her safely into her
bed, he returned to his room, brought the painting out from behind the
wardrobe and removed it from its bag.
There she was. Every time he laid eyes on
the image his heart jumped and he felt pure joy; the sort of joy which
blocked out everything else. His whole world was her smiling face.
He lay in bed that night with the painting propped up against the wall
next to his pillow so that he could imagine her lying next to him.
As he lay there, watching her in the dim light,
taking in every stroke of the brush, he began to imagine what life would
be like without Mother. Could he actually leave her alone in this
house and go off and make a life for himself? It had never been
possible in the past. Any girlfriend he'd ever brought home was
subject to his mother's merciless criticisms. She criticized the way
they spoke, or the way they dressed, or whatever morsel of their
personality she could extract from them in conversation, and she often
made these comments right in front of them. Consequently, none of
his attempts at a relationship had lasted very long and when the women
moved on his mother felt very pleased with herself; she'd protected her
little boy from the ‘hussy' or the ‘little tabby' as she called them, and
he was safe again. "We don't need them do we," she would say, giving him a
big hug to console him.
He had given up on leaving. He had resigned
himself to the fact that he would have to look after her until she died.
And, as his hatred of her grew, he'd even considered ways of bringing her
end on a little more swiftly than nature intended. But his fear of her was
greater than his hatred and so he had remained her ‘little boy.'
But, lying there with the painting of the woman
he loved propped beside him in bed, he began to wonder if perhaps he did
have the courage to leave. Her beauty, her knowing eyes, had
inspired him, brought order to his mind, given him courage. Smuggling her
up to his bedroom was proof of that at least. He continued to stare
at the form of her face, and into her eyes as he drifted further and
further away. And he dreamed.
But his dreaming was not the same as it had been
on previous nights. The dream began pleasantly enough, strolling
hand in hand with the woman in the painting along quiet streets in the
moonlight, but it wasn't long before his mind sensed a change. It
was subtle - he couldn't put his finger on it - but as with all dreams,
you just know when something isn't right, and he knew that something was
not right; not right at all.
His love had moved out of view and as he searched
for her through the dimly lit streets, streets which seemed faintly
familiar, he could hear, somewhere far away in the distance, a faint
ticking sound. His heart began to beat wildly as panic set in; he
knew that sound. The wind picked up and sent dust and leaves in
every direction. The trees which lined the street waved violently,
reaching out for him as he began to run. They held him back,
scratching and tearing at his arms and face. He yelled out and tried
to push the branches aside as blood poured down his face, but they would
just whip back at him, slashing him with greater violence. He knew
his love was trapped. He knew she was in danger and crying out for
him. He couldn't hear her though; in fact, even in his dreams he had
never heard her voice. But he knew she was calling his name -
somewhere.
The dream scene shifted and all at once he was
back in the house of his childhood, a big old creaking Victorian house,
and the air was cold. He was four years old again and standing in
his father's studio. Wallpaper patterned with thick brown and cream
stripes covered the walls which, to small eyes, seemed to stretch up
forever to a ceiling somewhere near the sky. Flecks of old paint
covered almost everything; all the furniture in the room as well as the
heavy white drop sheets on the floorboards. His father sat with his
back to him in the center of the room in front of an easel which supported
a blank canvas.
"Denny," he called out, scratching his forehead.
"Come over here." His father didn't look around but Dennis complied.
He stood next to his father, looking from the blank canvas to his father's
face and back again. In his father's hand, instead of a paint brush,
he held a Heineken. Dennis watched his father take a swig of beer
and wipe his chin with the back of the hand holding the bottle. The
bottle reminded Dennis of the cough medicine bottle; medicine his mother
forced him to drink whenever he was sick.
His father looked down at him and said "A
picture's worth a thousand words, Denny."
"I know Daddy," he heard himself say. His
father's gaze returned to the blank canvas before him.
"So, tell me a thousand words, Denny," he said
finally. "Tell me a goddamn thousand words." He poured some
more beer down his throat.
"I did a picture Daddy," Dennis heard himself
say, holding out a small sheet of paper covered with black paint.
His father's eyes darted to where he held out his picture, his beer paused
just in front of his lips. He snatched the picture from his son and
looked it over. It was a finger painting which vaguely resembled a
face. In the dream, Dennis knew it was meant to be the face of his
father; the father he loved and admired. His father also knew.
He took another swig of beer, and then stood up
and threw the stubbie at the wall where it exploded. Denny screamed
and stepped back.
"Shut up!"
His father lurched forward with an open hand to
hit the boy but Dennis pulled back just out of reach and his father fell
on his face. Dennis turned and ran out into the hallway. His
father was close behind him though, still holding Dennis's finger painting
in his left hand and grabbed Dennis's hair with his right, pulling him
back sharply. Dennis's legs gave out and he fell backwards, smacking
his head hard on the floor boards. His father stooped over him.
He watched as his father's face came down close to his own upside down.
"I'll teach you to fuck up my life you no good
piece of shit."
He dragged the boy by his hair into the entry
hall.
"No, no, Daddy," Dennis cried. "Not the
clock. I'm sorry Daddy. I'm sorry for the picture.
Please not the clock!"
There was the grandfather clock - huge, dark,
menacing - which stood as a lone sentinel in the entry hall. His
father strode up to it and pulled open the door of the small cupboard in
its base. He started pulling spare gears and clock weights out of
it, stuff that hadn't been used in years, throwing them all on the floor
before shoving Denny inside and forcing the door shut against the
intensity of the little boy's struggling. The latch clicked into
place.
"There," he said, laughing madly, "that shut you
up."
Dennis was terrified. His heart pounded.
He couldn't move, his knees pressed hard against his chest and he could
hardly breathe. He struggled, his muscles straining, trying to force
the cupboard door open. But his father sat on the floor with his
back against it. The clock impassively kept track of the time - tick
tock, tick tock - it boomed inside its box slowly and deliberately,
deriding the boy's rising panic.
His father sat there, ignoring the muted cries
and tapping coming from inside the clock, and held up Dennis's painting
before him in both hands.
"Just you remember boy, it's all your fault.
The good painting stopped when you arrived." His father began to sob now,
Denny could feel it against the door. "Your fucking mother got
herself pregnant. We got married." More sobbing. "I had
to get a job, you little fuck. Are you listening to me?" He
banged on the clock cabinet. "You think you're smart because you can
paint, huh? You think you're pretty smart?"
Dennis cried and yelled "no, no" but his father
didn't hear the muffled response.
"Hey, I've just had a smart idea," he said.
"The smartest one in a long time. Oh boy, your mother's gonna love
this. Yes she is."
He got up and hurried back down the hall.
Denny heard the footsteps pounding away.
Tick tock, tick tock.
By this time Dennis was going mad and pushed with
his legs and hands with all his strength. The door of the cupboard
cracked a little. He pushed again as hard as he could until he felt
as if he would burst and then the door gave way completely; spilled him
out onto the cold floor. He sobbed, big deep terrified sobs.
And the huge and impassive clock face looked down on him - tick tock, tick
tock, tick BANG.
Dennis ran down the hall to the studio. The
first thing he saw as he pushed the door open were his father's legs; his
blue jeans, paint flecked and worn through on the left knee.
The gun was next. The rifle lay on the
floor next to his father's jeans.
As he pushed the door open a little more and
stepped inside the room he saw his father's body, lying, still, his face
gone. He still clutched Dennis's painting in his left hand.
And on the canvas behind the body was the splattered blood and flesh and
bone of his father's head. The blood ran down the canvas in long
dark streaks and dripped onto the floor.
Painted at the top of the canvas in black paint,
the same black paint Dennis had used for his portrait of his father, were
words which, at the age of four, Dennis could not understand but which, in
his dream, were all too plain: SELF PORTRAIT.
Everything was silent now except for the ticking
of the clock which, as he stood there in the doorway, staring, trembling,
disbelieving, seemed to be getting louder and louder and louder - tick
tock, tick tock, tick tock, click clack, CLICK CLACK - his mother threw
the door of his bedroom open and Dennis awoke with a start.
"What's all the screaming about," she said with a
frown, rubbing her eyes. "Are you having another nightmare?"
As the light streamed in from the hallway she looked at him and then at
the painting which lay beside him. He followed her stare and looked
at the painting himself.
"Where did you get that painting?" his mother
asked, her voice shrill.
"I bought it," he said. "It's ... it's your
present."
"No, no, no," she said. "I don't ever want
to see that painting. Give it to me!" She lunged across the bedroom,
reaching out for it. "I want to tear it up, tear it up into little
pieces."
He sat up, struggling to hold it away from her.
"No, Mummy, no."
"You don't understand, Dennis. It was the
first painting your father ever painted of me. I hate it, I hate
it."
He looked into his mother's sixty year old face
and then at the painting of the woman he loved. Those eyes. He
looked back to his mother's face, wrinkled and hard, but the eyes were the
same. He was drawn to the painting in the store because it was in
some way familiar to him and, as he realized - with horror - that the
woman he hated most was the woman he loved more than any other, he
screamed.
He pushed his mother away, stood up, marched out
of his bedroom and into the living room where he pulled down the photo of
his mother high above the mantel and placed the painting on the wall in
its place. He stood back admiring his handiwork with a grimace.
The painting looked grotesque to him now and he wondered how he could ever
have been taken with it. He dropped the photo frame onto the hearth,
smashing it, just as his mother entered the room. She shrieked.
He marched past her, back into his bedroom, got dressed, and began to pack
a bag.
"I can't live with that thing in my house," she
cried as she came back to his bedroom. "Take it down! Take it
down right now!"
Denny ignored her. For the first time in
his life, he ignored her. He zipped his bag and then stormed out the
front door, his mother trailing closely behind, still shrieking at him.
"Come back here! Denny!" she screamed.
"Now! Now Denny! Where do you think you are you going?"
"Out," he yelled over his shoulder, and
was gone. © 2003 Andrew Tompkins |